A really sweet story....nice job.

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First of all, I gotta say, you sure can write! And I mean write! I've tired to write a full story but never seem to get to that point. I love how the Chapter's are long, really! I wish I can write as much as you can, clearly you are full of ideas! Something I am not.lol. ANYWAY this is fantastic, you definitely need to update this story, here and fanfiction.net! (Oh yeah, I read it there too )

Cause you sir, can write!


BTW nice newbies! I like Sarah Simmons the best! It's cute to imagine Griff older, and the fact Sarah Simmons gets butterflies around him makes it even more fun to read!(and when they kiss, awwwww, young love :3) I must admit at first i thought she was related to Griff cause of the last names, but not anymore. Unless there is a evil twist that Griff dates her not knowing they are related?! O.o

Nahhh, me and my silly ideas! hehe, update soon!

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When is MdX MaxX going to update? I really liked this story...

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Yes I have a masters degree on ssxology, doc.

That's a good question...

I have Chapter 7 almost finished. This week is winter break. Will I finish it? Who knows...

EDIT: I have half of it on FanFiction.net, it's been there for a while.

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I've read it already, just this morning I went to FanFiction.net to see if you
updated, but no luck...Either way I love your story, and hope to see a update, very, VERY, soon!

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What's this? I actually finished Chapter 7! It's on fanfiction.net

EDIT: I posted it up here, too. Enjoy!

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Already reviewed it back at fan fiction.net! Omg this story is sooo great!!
Really, one of the best I've read by far, your great! Awesome job, can't wait for more!

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Awesome story Maxx , can u feed our hunger for MORE ?????
thx in advance

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Lol, I'll try, Bennie.

Thanks for all the appreciation! I thank everyone for reading.

I have a ton of ideas floating around in my head. Once I organize some of them, Chapter 8 shouldn't be difficult to put together.

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i'm curious when Chapter 8 is coming. Do you know when?

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chapter 7 was great! nice drummania reference!

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I can't imagine Chapter 6 is complicated!!!!!
They got Kaori and Mac, making love!!!!!!

it was Awesome!!!!!!!!

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Mhm!

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I finally figured out how I want to start Chapter 8. I'll start writing soon.

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Hey!!! start it with Elise and JP!!!!!!!!!!!!


I mean.. I'm just kiddin..

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Okay. I've decided that this story is way too bloated for me to manage properly. If I do try to continue it, I just won't get it right, because I need many more details than I'm willing to come up with right now.

But all is not lost! I do love this story, and I'm not going to give it up. I don't know when, but I'm going to start it over. I may start this around January, when college applications are all in.

I will keep the same fundamental concepts, but I'll rework certain events, strip irrelevant details, and do a better job of characterization and relationships (Griff&Sarah definitely happened WAY too fast, and my other OCs don't have much personality yet). Chapter One will be separated from the story and will be an optional read, and I don't think I'll be reworking it (It may cause some inconsistencies, but oh well).

Sorry to those who have been waiting. But two years of rigorous English classes will definitely help me write a better story.

(And this time I won't write the whole story in BBCode. That got annoying...)

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Copy And Paste It. It's Easy.

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Okay, I'm starting this over. Current progress: 210 words. At least it's something.

I'm not sure what the new title will be. I'll change it when I figure it out.

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I've given up trying to write a good SSX story which focuses on a new season personally I find with all the different characters, the only things that happen are that Mac and Kaori get together, Zoe and Moby get together some other pairings and then it trails off before it lays abandoned on the FF forum. I've been reading yours today and it's actually quite good; I haven't finished reading yet or I would have reviewed. All I'd say is deffinitely figure out your main plot before you start writing, and if you're writing based on pairing OC's alone, stop and restart. Sorry, I'm a reviewer that puts flesh to my reviews and sometimes it comes across harsh. But I really don't believe imrpovements can be made without constructive crit.

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