My fanfic, part 1

Fri Oct 31, 2003 2:42 pm

I figured why the heck not... I haven't written anything, in any form, in forever, and seeing this forum I figured I would just try my hand at it. this is my first "fanfic" ever, so yeah. lemme know what you think

http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1584658

Last edited by Ravage on Sun Nov 02, 2003 9:52 pm, edited 1 time in total.

Sat Nov 01, 2003 12:00 pm

H'mm, pretty good. Can't wait for part 2.

Sat Nov 01, 2003 2:58 pm

Awesome fic you have there! I hope you continue it!

Maybe you can try and get it up at FanFiction.net

Sat Nov 01, 2003 5:55 pm

Yeah, you're writing sounds pretty good to me! I like how you left it really open-ended, but you better post a new part soon so we're not all left hanging! :dj

Sun Nov 02, 2003 5:38 am

Awesome insight on the charcters so far... :china

Sun Nov 02, 2003 1:30 pm

That's great! You're really good at descriptive writing. The only problem is that even though it wasn't too long, it looks it on the forum boards. It's a little daunting. I almost didn't read it at first because it looked kind of long. Maybe it would be good to find somewhere else to post the story, and provide a link.

Sun Nov 02, 2003 5:51 pm

A link would be a good idea. Save us some space.

Sun Nov 02, 2003 9:52 pm

by popular demand... i've hosted the first chapter on fanfiction.net; the link is above in my first post. thanks for the responses everyone, hopefully i can put out a chapter a week or something of this.

Mon Nov 03, 2003 6:57 pm

Thanx for the link. It easy on the eyes.