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PostPosted: Sat Aug 15, 2009 10:43 am  Post subject: Re: V: Supercross  
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A really sweet story....nice job.

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 12:39 am  Post subject: Re: V: Supercross  
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First of all, I gotta say, you sure can write! And I mean write! I've tired to write a full story but never seem to get to that point. :( I love how the Chapter's are long, really! I wish I can write as much as you can, clearly you are full of ideas! Something I am not.lol. ANYWAY this is fantastic, you definitely need to update this story, here and fanfiction.net! (Oh yeah, I read it there too :P)

Cause you sir, can write!


BTW nice newbies! I like Sarah Simmons the best! It's cute to imagine Griff older, and the fact Sarah Simmons gets butterflies around him makes it even more fun to read!(and when they kiss, awwwww, young love :3) I must admit at first i thought she was related to Griff cause of the last names, but not anymore. Unless there is a evil twist that Griff dates her not knowing they are related?! O.o

Nahhh, me and my silly ideas! hehe, update soon!

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 10:45 pm  Post subject: Re: V: Supercross  
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When is MdX MaxX going to update? I really liked this story... :(

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 12, 2010 5:23 pm  Post subject: Re: V: Supercross  
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SweetWildFlowers wrote:
When is MdX MaxX going to update? I really liked this story... :(
That's a good question...

I have Chapter 7 almost finished. This week is winter break. Will I finish it? Who knows...

EDIT: I have half of it on FanFiction.net, it's been there for a while.

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 7:46 pm  Post subject: Re: V: Supercross  
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MdX MaxX wrote:
That's a good question...

I have Chapter 7 almost finished. This week is winter break. Will I finish it? Who knows...

EDIT: I have half of it on FanFiction.net, it's been there for a while.



I've read it already, just this morning I went to FanFiction.net to see if you
updated, but no luck...Either way I love your story, and hope to see a update, very, VERY, soon! :)

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 20, 2010 10:11 pm  Post subject: Re: V: Supercross  
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What's this? I actually finished Chapter 7! It's on fanfiction.net

EDIT: I posted it up here, too. Enjoy!

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 21, 2010 10:29 pm  Post subject: Re: V: Supercross  
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Already reviewed it back at fan fiction.net! Omg this story is sooo great!!
Really, one of the best I've read by far, your great! Awesome job, can't wait for more! :notworthy :thumbsup

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 9:01 am  Post subject: Re: V: Supercross  
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Awesome story Maxx :thumbsup , can u feed our hunger for MORE ?????
thx in advance :D

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 4:47 pm  Post subject: Re: V: Supercross  
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Lol, I'll try, Bennie. :D

Thanks for all the appreciation! I thank everyone for reading.

I have a ton of ideas floating around in my head. Once I organize some of them, Chapter 8 shouldn't be difficult to put together.

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PostPosted: Fri Mar 05, 2010 11:23 am  Post subject: Re: V: Supercross  
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MdX MaxX wrote:
Lol, I'll try, Bennie. :D

Thanks for all the appreciation! I thank everyone for reading.

I have a ton of ideas floating around in my head. Once I organize some of them, Chapter 8 shouldn't be difficult to put together.


i'm curious when Chapter 8 is coming. Do you know when?

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 11, 2010 4:59 pm  Post subject: Re: V: Supercross  
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chapter 7 was great! nice drummania reference!

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PostPosted: Mon May 31, 2010 3:24 am  Post subject: Re: V: Supercross  
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I can't imagine Chapter 6 is complicated!!!!!
They got Kaori and Mac, making love!!!!!!

it was Awesome!!!!!!!! ;P

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 01, 2010 11:44 am  Post subject: Re: V: Supercross  
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Mhm!

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 16, 2010 9:44 am  Post subject: Re: V: Supercross  
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I finally figured out how I want to start Chapter 8. I'll start writing soon.

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 17, 2010 4:48 am  Post subject: Re: V: Supercross  
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MdX MaxX wrote:
I finally figured out how I want to start Chapter 8. I'll start writing soon.


Hey!!! start it with Elise and JP!!!!!!!!!!!!
:D :D :D

I mean.. I'm just kiddin.. :lol

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 03, 2010 5:49 pm  Post subject: Re: V: Supercross  
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Okay. I've decided that this story is way too bloated for me to manage properly. If I do try to continue it, I just won't get it right, because I need many more details than I'm willing to come up with right now.

But all is not lost! I do love this story, and I'm not going to give it up. I don't know when, but I'm going to start it over. I may start this around January, when college applications are all in.

I will keep the same fundamental concepts, but I'll rework certain events, strip irrelevant details, and do a better job of characterization and relationships (Griff&Sarah definitely happened WAY too fast, and my other OCs don't have much personality yet). Chapter One will be separated from the story and will be an optional read, and I don't think I'll be reworking it (It may cause some inconsistencies, but oh well).

Sorry to those who have been waiting. But two years of rigorous English classes will definitely help me write a better story.

(And this time I won't write the whole story in BBCode. That got annoying...)

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 04, 2010 12:30 am  Post subject: Re: V: Supercross  
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Copy And Paste It. It's Easy.

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 13, 2011 11:39 am  Post subject: Re: V: Supercross  
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Okay, I'm starting this over. Current progress: 210 words. At least it's something. :P

I'm not sure what the new title will be. I'll change it when I figure it out.

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 13, 2011 12:28 pm  Post subject: Re: V: Supercross  
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I've given up trying to write a good SSX story which focuses on a new season personally I find with all the different characters, the only things that happen are that Mac and Kaori get together, Zoe and Moby get together some other pairings and then it trails off before it lays abandoned on the FF forum. I've been reading yours today and it's actually quite good; I haven't finished reading yet or I would have reviewed. All I'd say is deffinitely figure out your main plot before you start writing, and if you're writing based on pairing OC's alone, stop and restart. :heh Sorry, I'm a reviewer that puts flesh to my reviews and sometimes it comes across harsh. But I really don't believe imrpovements can be made without constructive crit.

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